What are beta readers? Why, when and how to use them?

You’ve just finished writing your precious novel; you’ve read through it multiple times and fixed countless inconsistencies, grammatical errors and plot holes. You think it’s pretty close to being complete… wrong.

You are so close to your story lines that you are blind to countless tiny details. Your scenes and characters are so vivid in your imagination that you struggle to understand how a first time reader perceives them. Are you going to wait until your manuscript is published before realising that your reader’s perceptions are different to your own?

This is the time to reach out to a circle of beta readers, take that intermittent step of seeing how your baby flies before releasing it to the hordes for disembowelling.

I have a small circle of five beta readers and they are people I know and love. This isn’t a requirement and some people will tell you that it is better to use those who have no emotional attachment to telling you that your work is terrible. I prefer to leverage existing relationships with people I know I can have a deep discussion with and bounce ideas around while knowing they are dedicated to the output being the best it can be… a mixture is fine as well.

First off I choose people who want to read my book, you’re not going to want to hang around long to collect their feedback so it helps that they have a healthy appetite to sink their teeth into it.

Next I choose a mixture of user types and you want to understand them so you can understand their feedback. Are they into your book genre? What styles of writing do they prefer? Who are their favourite authors? For my current book I have chosen at least one person who is not into my book genre so that I can get an alternative viewpoint around the depth of my characters and how easy the plot line is to follow.

Book proofs ordered for my beta readers through Create Space
Book proofs ordered for my beta readers through Create Space

Make it as easy as you can for your beta readers to read your manuscript. Deliver it to them in an easy to read format and if they can scribble thoughts and notes as they go all the better. I am using Amazon’s Create Space to self publish initially and their process allows me to order proof prints at cost price. It also gives you a great opportunity to see how your cover looks and it is a great present to hand back to your readers once you’ve collected and analysed their feedback.

Have regular check in conversations during their read. It is very telling how someone feels about your book when they are only a few chapters in, real readers may give up on your story if they are not gripped sufficiently upfront. Try and check in while your beta readers are fresh a few chapters in, near the middle and before the end so that you can help build on your story at key points and keep the real readers locked in for the long haul.

Give your beta readers your book in a format that they can scribble on as they read
Give your beta readers your book in a format that they can scribble on as they read

It is important to remember that your manuscript is your work, try to ask for problems and not solutions. A problem can be solved in a number of ways and each reader will have their own suggestion, but the solution should come from your own heart – this is your story!

A nice touch is to thank your beta readers in your acknowledgements section. With any luck they will feel invested and help champion your work, shouting from the rooftops or through social media.

Meet a character: Jojo

Jojo and her twin brother were raised in the desert-trading hub of Old Gola. Passed from one merchant to another, they scraped through their childhood, always just earning enough to survive another day. They looked after one another; they were a team that stood strong against the cruel life they had been dealt.

Jojo - Desert Walker

Although born within minutes of each other, Jojo was always the stronger of the two, both mentally and in talent. She excelled in a town where there was always something to be fixed and eventually found a suited role as a mechanic under a merchant called Plateco. She would fix travelling vehicles that passed in and out of the bustling trade hub and was even allowed to build her own sand skimmer from leftover parts.

Jojo’s love for the jet engine vehicle flourished. She would regularly strip her sand skimmer down to its core components, remove unnecessary weight and replace the weaker parts for newly found, more powerful ones. She was getting better at riding it too.

When Rafa, her twin brother, got himself into trouble with the local law, she had no choice but to strike a deal for his freedom. She took on the incredibly dangerous role of smuggle runner, her custom built sand skimmer and natural talent for riding the vehicle was all she had to evade capture. Her objective was to travel across the tectonic ridges that separated her world with the new and bring back what ever her owners had acquired.

Dillan pulled Jojo and her brother free from this life of insanity, he gave them an opportunity to change the harsh world that had treated them so unfairly. Jojo now fights for a cause she can believe in, one that may actually make a difference some day.

She is a Desert Walker, an assassin of the Scratch and she is going to put an end to this rhythm of greedom that the new world inflicts upon the old.

Fighting for the Falco Resistance

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Introducing: The Kings of the New World

Set in a large world with multiple story lines that weave and intersect with each other. The Kings of the New World sets the scenes of a hard science fiction / epic fantasy journey called The Rhythms of Greedom.

Meet some of the characters from the first book at www.therhythmsofgreedom.com
Meet some of the characters from the first book at www.therhythmsofgreedom.com

In a world that once fell from mankind’s greed and constant struggle for power, corporations took charge and rebuilt societies in their own image. Three centuries later they have carved out their own lands and dubbed themselves kings, living in a new world of luxury and perfection. The people thrive on science, living in a manmade paradise and enhancing their bodies through augmentation.

The old world hasn’t gone away though and the kings of the new have no intention of welcoming them into their precious lands. They have become reliant on exploiting the old world’s people and resource, further pushing the poverty gap between them.

But their grip is slipping… have the kings become complacent in their luxurious and extended old lives? There are those who want to put an end to this rhythm of greedom. An estranged prince, a disobedient godfather and a children’s tale with an ordain power are amongst the few set out on their own paths to end this cycle.Book One: The Kings of the New World is due to be released in late Spring / Early Summer 2015.

Follow the website as it grows with more character information, maps and story lines: www.therhythmsofgreedom.com

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